Saturday, August 30, 2008

Part 4

"Mrs. Henderson?" Asked the well fit policeman.
"Yes? Is this about my husband...Jim?" I asked.
"Well actually, yes. A few witnesses saw you walk over to them and kiss Jim and leave. And we found that from poison. I would like to take you in for questioning"
"You think I would kill my husband?" I yelled.
"Well...We just want to take you in for questioning... How about tomorrow morning at 10?" He said in a calm, steady voice, that almost made me want to calm down. No, this man was accusing me of killing my husband.
"That's fine for me."
"See you then. And Mrs. Henderson?"
"Yes. There is something we need to show you." And with that he closed the door and drove away before I could call after him.
There was no way I'd be able to sleep tonight.

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Tuesday, May 20, 2008

Got You!

Haha. Crazy Daisies! lol! I love you!!!!! Hehe! Don't worry, I would've told you 8 years from now, jk, I would've told you sooner or later. I love you forever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

Saturday, May 17, 2008

New Poll

Hey guys! I am trying to write the next part to my story, but I can't decide what should happen. Should this story be a mystery or romance? Please comment on which one you like better AND vote in my poll! Thank you sooooo much!!

Sunday, May 4, 2008

baseball guy

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It gives great advice about baseball. And he loves the Boston Red Sox! How cool is that??

Wednesday, April 23, 2008

What happened?

Hey guys,
What's up? I have been stressed so much lately! hehe. What ever happened to Amani's blogs? The stories were so good. Well I hope that you found someone to publish them and had to take them off the internet so nothing would happen to them, see I hope for the best. Well Amani, if you ever read this, I just want you to know how much I loved your stories, they were so inspiring! I wish you the best of luck!!

<3 Pinky

Saturday, April 12, 2008

Part 3

As I looked across the sidewalk I could see his hand in Martha’s. How could this happen again? Yes. It was the second time I had seen it. Why hadn’t I left him? Because I couldn’t, without him I wouldn’t have my job. I wouldn’t have my three story house. The only reason I had stayed with him was because I simply couldn’t stand to let him go. I still loved him. Martha turned to kiss him on the lips and that was when it happened. The car swerving on the road, going onto the sidewalk, hitting Martha and Jim. Killing them instantly. Killing them! I couldn’t bare to see them lying hopelessly on the ground, all I could do was give him a hug and a kiss goodbye. I couldn’t stand being there so I ran home. I couldn't care less about Martha, but it was Jim. Jim’s life down the drain. How could this happen? Yesterday at this time Jim and I were watching Forest Gump and everything was perfectly fine. And now sirens and crowds surrounded them. The thing that hurt the most was the way Jim had died. His hand in Martha’s. NO, It was suppose to be her hand. We were supposed to die together, not Martha and him. The last words he had said to me was………….No, I couldn’t think of him any more. It would only make it worse for myself. That is when I was sitting on my couch upstairs when I heard a siren outside my door. And then a knock. As I opened the door all I could think of was Jim, wondering if this man’s visit was because of him.

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New Post coming soon!

Hey! Sorry I haven't added another part to my post, but I have been very busy lately. Can you do me a favor? Please vote for my polls on the side, I just added a new one! Thanks! Shortly I will be adding a new part to the story. Please comment on all of them. This really helps me as a writer to know what I can do to improve my story. The worst thing you can say is nothing. That doesn't help at all. But maybe you can tell me if it is boring or exciting...... Thank you guys so much! I will be very busy this week and next week so I may not have time to post another part, but perhaps I will. So keep looking at my website to see if I have added anything!

<3 Pinky

Sunday, April 6, 2008

Part 2

"Hello, my name is Jane, I will be your server today. Is there anything I can get you to start out with?"
"I think we are ready to order."
"Alright, What can I get you ma'am?"
"I'll have the cesar salad with the dessing on the side"
"And for you?" The waitress said as she scribbled down Kelly's order.
"I'll have the double cheeseburger."
"Okay, If you need anything else just give me a wave."
As I sipped down my lemondade Jim and I both starred at the aqua colored ocean.
"Wow, it is so pretty out today." I stated as she finished her last sip of lemonade.
"It sure is."
"Maybe do you want to go to the beach after this?"
"I really want to, but I better head down to the office. I have a lot to get down before our wedding!"
"Your right. I have to finish some stuff up to." Kelly says disappointedly.
There meal came a few minutes later and they were eating just as Jim's phone rang.
"Oh, Hi it's Martha."
"Can you hold on a moment?"
"Honey, I need to take this, it's for work it sound urgent. I will see you at the house later. Alright?" Jim said as he covered up the mouth piece on the phone.
"Sure. I will see you tonight."
Jim walked out of the restaurant while I waved to the waiter to get the check. I paid and left in a huff.
Today I didn't really feel like going to work. I normally go on weekends, but I just wasn't up to it. I'm sure Paul would understand. I quickly went home and changed into my bathing suit and headed down to the beach. All I needed was to relax. I didn't really want to go into the water, I just needed to relax and maybe even get a tan. I decided that it was to beautiful to drive to the beach and walking would be better.
I was getting tired and I was just about ready to leave when at that moment I knew my life would change forever.....

Please comment on it!! Please! I know, it is horrible! :(

Part 1

I am really bored so I am going to write a story.

As Kelly jogged along the beach she could feel the sun making its way through the clouds. Turning right on Curituck Lane led her right to the back of her house. After hosing off her sandy feet she made her way to the back door swatting all the mosquitoes she could. "Kelly, Is that you?" Jim asked. "Ya, I'm going to take a shower then I'll be ready." "Okay, take your time. I will be outside on the deck reading." "Ok" Kelly yelled from her bedroom.

I have to go to bed, but I will finish in the morning. Please comment about it! Thanks!!

Saturday, April 5, 2008


Hey guys! I am about to write a story! It is really late here in NC so I will write it tomorrow. So look at my site tomorrow! Thanks!

<3 Pinky

Amazing Story!

This is such a great site! She is writing a story and it is amazing! Dome a favor and go to it! Go to it!!
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Welcome to my website! This is a new website, so there isn't much on it now, so bare with me. I will try to add stuff everyday! If you could tell all your friends about my website I would love that! My website is: You can also e-mail me at

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